Dear Teddy, I am glad to hear that you will come to China. You’ve told me that you are very interested in ancient Chinese cultural relics, especially the Great Wall. Now, I will give you a brief introduction to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. In 1987, it was added to the World Heritage list. The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies. The Great wall is a wonder that was created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings. Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon! Yours, Li Hua 试题分析：考查提纲类作文，本文是介绍中悠最竞国的伟大奇迹长城，给出部分的要点。本文的难点在于选择合适的词汇把文字提示的内容表达出来，同时要注意选择合适的连接词把各要点连接起来。也要使用多变典乡的句式让文章充降眠满变化，不要过于死板。点评：本文介绍的是中国的长城，要点给出不多。对考生的谋篇布局的能力要求较高，要合理的分布各个要点，用适当的连接词来连接成流畅的短文。在选择词汇时要注意选择一些相对高级的词汇让文章的层次更高。