求大师帮忙修改下作文,看看有没有什么语法错误,感觉自己连词用的好奇怪啊

From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived in a traffic accident with other psople's help,which reflects the warmth of our society In case of emergency,the people passing the accident scene choosed to spare no effort to save the man instead of ignoring him .Besides, however terrible the sitution is,they never gave up.Therefore, what imressed me most is their self-sacrifice spirit, which i think account for the survival of the man
匿名用户    2014-05-01 15:31    

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From the passage i know that a man fortunately survived a traffic accident under other psople's help,which reflects the warmth of our society. In the ...emergency,the people whosaw theaccident choosed to spare no effort to save the man instead of ignore him .Besides, however terrible the sitution was,they never gave up. What impressed me most is that their self-sacrifice spirit, which i think account for the survival of the man. survive sth,不要用survive in sth,instead of 后接do即可,还有表语从句前必须有that

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匿名用户    2014-05-03 10:00